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Tuesday, 5 October 2010
Feedback on my story board for "Suck me Beautiful"
Hey Guys can you please leave the feedback you have for my story board here, thanks!!! :D (Story board can be found on my pages)
The storyboards are nice and clear Kelly. I think this will make it easier to film because you have a good idea of what you want it to look like. I think to improve them though, you need to fill out the edits and shot types. Make sure you have a range of these and think about how they will enhance the tension and suspense among your target audience. Hope this helps :)
It's a very good idea :)
ReplyDeleteThe storyboards are nice and clear Kelly. I think this will make it easier to film because you have a good idea of what you want it to look like. I think to improve them though, you need to fill out the edits and shot types. Make sure you have a range of these and think about how they will enhance the tension and suspense among your target audience. Hope this helps :)
ReplyDeleteyou have got alot of camera shots and lighting sorted, but it might just be me but i find it hard to understand what is happening in the trailer.
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